Monday, September 8, 2008

STARS
In the dark I shine so bright
Because I twinkle late at night.
The moon lies asleep in the sky
That’s when I wish that I could fly.
Although I know it won’t come true,
I start to cry boo, hoo, hoo.
Message:The message to this story is your dreams to fly won't come true.
This is a descriptive rhyming poem about the stars...

9 comments:

i.luv.jesus said...

hi lalo its me salu just saying that i like ur poem its really nice lol.

Queen Elizabeth said...

Hi LaLoifi i lik ur poem dis is qween elizabiff and u knw wat 2 do bow down all hail qween elizabiff... nahh jus jokes u got a cool page all pink!

Juny-roXX said...

Kul PoEm...
Hu dId U GeT dA LaSt LiNe Of Ur PoEm FrM.. LOL.

hAhAHAAHAHAHAH...
bYe...MwAhH

Nd ReMeMbEr PeAcE

liL.mUt said...

i like your poem but your page is toooooooo girlieeeee,but you have a long introduction.

David Winter said...

bow down

...FoReVeR_aNd_eVeR... said...

LOVING DA PICTURE!

Mizz lil cutie said...

awww hae ma sisdah loving ur pix lolz hahaha mwahzz

shadow x said...

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Mizz lil cutie said...

hae hae ma sisdah lovin dah poem lolz hehe wel holl3 bk at me k mwahzZ and yeah u look so pretty 2dae lolz muil lve 4rm ur sisdah ana aka A.T.R.I.S wat wat